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Death Of Jill Valetine

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She couldn't register exactly how her body was reacting....but she felt her veins pulsate in pain, Tears stroll down her face in agony. Blood spilling from her mouth and from where the long bone structured talon had pierced her abdomen. The tyrant had chosen to kill not eat. But the pain rendered her motionless, paralyzed her almost entirely. She didn't know exactly what to say.....she didn't know if she could say anything. Her long brunette hair now covered in blood, Beautiful face now smothered in her own blood. She....wanted it to be like this because if she hadn't done this to be killed by the tyrant instead then Chris and Rebecca would have parished instead. They where her fellow survivors....her friends....family she couldn't let that happen to her no way in hell would she. She surprisingly grasped the talon clutching it as she turned her head to look at the two. They where frozen in fear and denial.....

"Like old times....." She smiled at them. She referred to her saving them countless times. "We'll give you S.T.A.R.S." She managed to speak and give them a thumbs up. But she saw the tears already rolling down they're faces. She knew with every word and movement she was killing herself faster.....but she had final words to speak. She turned back to the monster who was her former father and let her own tears roll as she extended her hand to the deformed face that once belonged to Dick Valentine thief extraordinare. Best father ever. "I'm sorry daddy.....I wish.....I could have saved you....." Maybe because of his last thread of humanity a single tear fell from his face onto her hand. "I love you....." But as soon as the words where said she felt her body shut down and give way to death. Her lifeless body hung there on the talon and not a word was said. The monster didn't even move.

"Jill!" It was Chris who finally screamed her name. But it was Rebeccas cries that could be heard. Now Jill Valentine was gone...she was no more. She wasn't living....she couldn't have kids or get married or even save the world anymore. It broke everyones heart not just theres but her former fathers to. To quickly was she taken from the world and to quickly had she said her final words.
I'm sorry I thought adding Dick Valentine made it...better maybe??

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twilight-lightning's avatar
It's great. Though somethings are unneeded, such as the multiple ". . ." You captured a stage of near death perfectly. Well written, good job.